[Fan Story] The Assassin of Rata Sum
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NOTE: Please provide positive feedback, which is: what I did right, and what I can improve upon.
Updates:
09/15/2017: Updated Vini's Hooded and Hoodless pics in the main thread
08/14/2017: Prologue revised again, Chapter 1 being revised.
07/05/2017: Prologue revised
06/25/2017: Settled on a title.
06/12/2017: Some concept scenes written.
01/17/2016: Chapter 12 has been added!
11/20/2015: Chapter 11 has been added!
The Assassin of Rata Sum – Main Link
Vini’s Musical Theme
Note: Vini’s name is pronounced “Vi-KNEE”
There are lots of things to be changed from the typical GW2 storyline:
- While it starts out similar to the Asura Storyline, dialogue will be changed, and the main story arc will be different.
- The Inquest have a much bigger role, even after the ‘race arc,’ they are the primary antagonists.
- Vini will meet my other characters in my account, who will help her out.
Point of View:
- The Prologue is the only ‘chapter’ in first person, the rest is in third person.
Pictures of Vini:
Commissioned Pic of Vini:
Hooded and Hoodless Pictures:
I hope you enjoy this story! Please give feedback! This is a re-post of the old thread from the old forums, so all the comments are gone. However, it's still the same awesome story! Thank you very much!
Comments
I was looking for a section to post my fan made story dice I started making some and I found urs. It's really good I like it a lot.
Just wanted to say I'm not stealing ur ideas mine just happens to be about a thief, Necro,rev and maybe my ranger too depends if I have room for her lol.
you say mesmer i say shadow sorcerer
Thank you very much! I love writing. I have a ton of original novel ideas and an original novel I'm working on, I really want to be a novelist.
Post it here in the Community Creations, or did you mean a place to post your story online? (like fanfiction.net?)
been a while since i've played gw2. upon returning first thing i thought of was this fanfic....was a pain to find with new forums <.<
glad to see this thread =D
You're in luck! As soon as I finish my Rydia Fan Fic, I'm going to start uploading revised chapters of Vini's Story! I may also stick a chapter in the middle somewhere showing how the asura of Rata Sum treat Pol--being Vini's brother. It's sad, yet you'll get to see more of Vini's protective/loving older sister side.
sweet =D
can't wait. i should also start your other fic <.< looks at pile of books i've been neglecting .....edges away from books