I love this outfit. It's over the top but within the realm of plausibility. It fits all my characters, all races and genders, in an elegant fashion. (Minor clipping on male asura thigh poking through the coat, but that doesn't bother me). No outrageous shoulders, charr tail/horn/ears unaffected and tail gets a flap (forgot to check asura toes). I'm a little sad the female asura get the dress rather than coat version, but I know many many players will be thrilled by that.
My only real critique goes to the male dye channels. On something this intricate I know it can be hard to choose where to apply the four channels. But for my personal aesthetic I would suggest that rather than coat/boots, vest/gloves, pants/coat edge, and trim, it be coat/pants, gloves/boots/coat edge, vest, trim. (That coat edge is what makes it so hard to aportion -- but really, coat and boots are almost never a gentleman's choice of color matches And my suggested distribution allows color contrasts to show the details).