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Warrick's Tale

So I'm writing a story about my main character. you can read it here https://www.wattpad.com/story/210995631-warrick's-tale, and here https://taleofwarrick.tumblr.com/post/190148470012/warricks-tale-part-0. It will be very much charr centric as I mainly play charr. I would like some critique on it, please.