The thing that stood up to me about the video is that three quotes in a row use the word "amazing". If you read them all back to back like in the video, it starts to feel very repetitive. I'd rather pick quotes with more variety in words used and comments on specific aspects of the game. One or two more vague ones can work in between, but you don't want to read basically the same comment three times in a row and with such a short video you would want to pack as much information in as possible. The quotes that mention specific things are better, stuff that's related to the story, game play, maps, mounts etc.