TheLuckOfTheClaws.4592 Posted May 15, 2020 Share Posted May 15, 2020 I think I screwed up the anatomy a little, but I tried to draw my Charr thief, Lucky Singefletcher. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thepenmonster.3621 Posted May 15, 2020 Share Posted May 15, 2020 Looks appropriately cuddly to me. Were you aiming for bad-ass? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLuckOfTheClaws.4592 Posted May 15, 2020 Author Share Posted May 15, 2020 @thepenmonster.3621 i think i was trying to aim for a middle ground between 'feirce' and 'cute' but i didn't really hit either of those. oh well, live and learn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChillyKoti.1928 Posted May 15, 2020 Share Posted May 15, 2020 Your drawing is well done and I see what direction you were trying to go (with the "feirce and cute" thing).You seem to be leaning towards a cartoonish style right now. I feel like it's a bit more cute than feirce. To be more balanced, you'll need to add a bit more detail on the feirce side (specifically looking at the eyes and mouth), but not too much. Big eyes is what usyally makes a character cute and friendly looking in a cartoonish style.My final concern would be her left arm (or our right when we look at the drawing). The arm seems a bit twisted and not in the proper direction compared with the rest of the body. The main thing to rework would be the hand. A tip I use is to look at myself in the mirror with the same pose as the character I wish to draw. (Look closely how your hand would look like in the pose). I think that is what you meant by "proportion", however, if you were really aiming for a cartoonish style, your current body / head / limbs size is quite good.In resume, small rework to the eyes (for a little bit more "feirce" look) and the position of the hand for now. (I'm really no expert at drawing, this is simply my observations.)On a side note, I like your drawing and your style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLuckOfTheClaws.4592 Posted May 16, 2020 Author Share Posted May 16, 2020 @Edge.8724 Thank you for your thoughtful feedback and comment! I will take note of this when I redraw this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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