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Let's imagine if Secretes of Obscure is that:

The Astral Ward are hidden protectors of Tyria for ages against the Demons threat. Against demons, they use Arcane magic as a tool.

In the current generation, among them is a young woman named Zalve.

She is a PRODIGY, already as a child he mastered the studies of magic, and was at the top of his class.

As the lands of the Astral Wards became too small for her, she was allowed to travel across Tyria to increase her knowledge.

She became interested and studied at Asura's College of Synergetics and was at the top of her class. She became interested in technology and saw the possibilities of bringing magic and technology together.

She returned the the lands of Astral Wards, and here she developed a means of converting arcane magic as energy, to fuel physical/mechanical devices, the Arcane Energy is born.

The world of the Astral Wards has changed, there are all kinds of robots, transmission lines, and you can replenish the energy of any machinery with the "Astral Energy Batteries".

However, there is something suspicious, there are demons appearing..... they seem attracted to where there is Arcane Energy......,

.,...........

What be your reaction if Secret of Obscure plot was in that lines?

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1. She or he? You seem undecided. 😆

2. Yes, great idea! 😉 Let's repeat stuff we have already had way too much of for the past eleven years:

  • All sorts of creatures being attracted to ley-line energy, only now it's "arcane" energy.
  • More technology that ruins the experience of adventure and discovery.

:classic_rolleyes: No, thank you.
 

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1 hour ago, ZeftheWicked.3076 said:

Say NO to another Mary Sue.

Guild Wars 2 already gave us a fair portion of anti male bias.
If it's a genius who has actual impact on the story then 75% chance it'll be a girl.
Zojja, Taimi, Scarlet, Joon.

It it's a male genius, 75% chance he's dead.
Snaff, Omadd, Blish..  only Gorrik still lives...much to my chagrin.

Honestly at this point I'm feeling thankful our commander doesn't have a female side-kick that saves the world instead of him when push comes to shove, unless your commander is female than she's allowed to save the world proper..

Dudes saying stuff like this are never anywhere to be found when it's time to call out actually problematic stories lacking compelling or competent women in them.

And calling Gw2 biased against men is so off-base that it wouldn't even make for a funny joke.

The latest story from Gw2 featured *checks notes* 3 men and an agender person as our primary companions, so...

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1 hour ago, mandala.8507 said:

Dudes saying stuff like this are never anywhere to be found when it's time to call out actually problematic stories lacking compelling or competent women in them.

And calling Gw2 biased against men is so off-base that it wouldn't even make for a funny joke.

The latest story from Gw2 featured *checks notes* 3 men and an agender person as our primary companions, so...

They have to move the goalposts.

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6 hours ago, ugrakarma.9416 said:

Imaginons si Secrets of Obscure est que :

Les Astral Ward sont des protecteurs cachés de la Tyrie depuis des lustres contre la menace des démons. Contre les démons, ils utilisent la magie des Arcanes comme outil.

Dans la génération actuelle, parmi eux se trouve une jeune femme nommée Zalve.

C'est une PRODIGE, déjà enfant, il maîtrisait les études de magie et était en tête de sa classe.

Comme les terres des quartiers astraux devenaient trop petites pour elle, elle fut autorisée à voyager à travers la Tyrie pour approfondir ses connaissances.

Elle s'est intéressée et a étudié au Collège de synergie d'Asura et était en tête de sa classe. Elle s'est intéressée à la technologie et a vu les possibilités de réunir la magie et la technologie.

Elle est revenue sur les terres des Astral Wards, et ici elle a développé un moyen de convertir la magie des arcanes en énergie, pour alimenter des dispositifs physiques/mécaniques, l'Arcane Energy est née.

Le monde des Astral Wards a changé, il y a toutes sortes de robots, de lignes de transmission, et vous pouvez reconstituer l'énergie de n'importe quelle machine avec les "Astral Energy Batteries".

Cependant, il y a quelque chose de suspect, des démons apparaissent ..... ils semblent attirés par l'endroit où se trouve l'énergie arcanique ......,

.,...........

Quelle serait votre réaction si l'intrigue de Secret of Obscure était dans ces lignes ?

Uh... no way? I cry lol!

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7 hours ago, ugrakarma.9416 said:

Let's imagine if Secretes of Obscure is that:

The Astral Ward are hidden protectors of Tyria for ages against the Demons threat. Against demons, they use Arcane magic as a tool.

In the current generation, among them is a young woman named Zalve.

She is a PRODIGY, already as a child he mastered the studies of magic, and was at the top of his class.

As the lands of the Astral Wards became too small for her, she was allowed to travel across Tyria to increase her knowledge.

She became interested and studied at Asura's College of Synergetics and was at the top of her class. She became interested in technology and saw the possibilities of bringing magic and technology together.

She returned the the lands of Astral Wards, and here she developed a means of converting arcane magic as energy, to fuel physical/mechanical devices, the Arcane Energy is born.

The world of the Astral Wards has changed, there are all kinds of robots, transmission lines, and you can replenish the energy of any machinery with the "Astral Energy Batteries".

However, there is something suspicious, there are demons appearing..... they seem attracted to where there is Arcane Energy......,

.,...........

What be your reaction if Secret of Obscure plot was in that lines?

My reaction would be: "Isn't this pretty much just Scarlet 2.0...?"

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On 7/12/2023 at 2:33 PM, Ashantara.8731 said:

1. She or he? You seem undecided. 😆

2. Yes, great idea! 😉 Let's repeat stuff we have already had way too much of for the past eleven years:

  • All sorts of creatures being attracted to ley-line energy, only now it's "arcane" energy.
  • More technology that ruins the experience of adventure and discovery.

:classic_rolleyes: No, thank you.
 

she,

yes im mocking the "default plot" for near every gw2 history. :)

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